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Revamping Old Stories

Wed Feb 11, 2015, 5:13 PM


So I recently stumbled across :iconchrissyissypoo19: 's gallery and her Addison Diary story. One of my most favorite things to write, to play with, is someone dealing with a rather impatient patient. Love it. 

So it got me thinking of my next best angry persona, Kyle Montague. So I'm rewriting his little TFK bit. It's going to be more 1 v 1, from Ira's point of view. And Ira is now playing the role of Doctor to the Knight General Montague, who has scratched and bitten his way through every doctor on the island who's tried to nurse him through his infected furling wound. I'm still determining what kind of infection it is, furlings can carry literally any infection you can think of. I don't want it to be pulmonary, though, not with Alex around. Alex is the one who coughs and he was ill suited for this position because he's too friendly about it. Alex wants to be your friend, Kyle wants to stab your eyes out. Because you looked at him. It's almost like he doesn't want to get better...

So expect that old piece to be moved into scraps soon, it's now outdated. 

Look, I even have this little bit all set up now:

"You may be disinclined to believe me, Dr. Jerkins, but Mr. Montague is a ferocious person." Dr. Trelly rolled up his left sleeve, his arm sported a scar in the shape of-

"Are those...he bit you?" Ira gasped.

"Oh yes," Dr. Trelly replied, pulling his sleeve back down, "In his defense I was trying to shove medication down his throat. But he has refused to see me since, despite my best intentions. I'm hoping you can be a bit more persuasive."

Ira's a little softer in his approach, but I have this one scene in mind where he's just fed up at talking Monty down, Kyle might end up going by Monty now it fits his attitude better, and tries to manhandle him back into bed. Monty stabs him with a bread knife in the process. Straight up stabs him but the effort makes him sick. That's when Dr. Trelly is finally allowed back on the estate, to treat Ira and say 'I told you so'. 

Monty, I'm liking that a lot more now that I'm using it, is infected with the fantasy version of Yellow Fever, I'll smudge the details later but it's kinda like how Red Cough is Karaman Tuberculosis. But like I said I already have one character who coughs and he's not the grumpy one. 




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Kelly Sturken
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I'm a cartoonist with a thing for griffins. My main comic is Semi-Charmed and I'm also writing a fantasy series called The House of Claw. When I'm not drawing, I'm either playing video games or poking people with sticks.
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SeanMcFarland Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fav-splosion! Always does my heart good! :D
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CathyMouse2010 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
thanks for the fav ^^
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CathyMouse2010 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015
thanks for the fav ^^
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AlexVanArsdale Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the faves! And I see you have to Super Strike 10 stamp on your page! 

Thank you so much! :D 
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thegriffin88 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Well yeah! Gotta let everyone know what a cool comic it is! 
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the watch :)
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PirateHearts Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Filmographer
Thanks for the faves! :)
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RenagadeRexRider Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhsVbL…

...............i honestly must go and kick my own ass for spreading this....
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thegriffin88 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Someone get a doctor in here! 

*Sapphire busts through the wall*

I can't type anymore, I'm loling too hard. :officechair: And it's late so I have to lol quietly and can't breathe! XD Phew!  I didn't know I needed that clip in my life. Whatever that is from I want it. 
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RenagadeRexRider Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:lmao: It's the FMA Koma theater that for a long while was exclusive only to Japan as extras. some of them are literally animations of the shorts in the back of the Mangas. :lmao:

and i just realize that they were finally dubbed and released here:XD: look em up and lyao:XD:
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